opening sequence feedback

i put my film onto facebook to see what everyone thought, as most friends i have on facebook are from 15-21 mostly so i thought it would be a good idea.

the response i got were all positive except the ending how it just cuts off but we thought we would end it on the establishing shot, to show everyone where the first scene would be.

I asked them to rate the film out of 10, the feedback i got, was 3 people said 10, 3 people said 9, and 1 person said 8. so the feedback we got was very good and made us proud of it and helped us evaluate the blog.